Always alone

by Anonymous Angel   Jan 20, 2007


Always alone that's how my life is,
Having someone to care for,
Is something I miss.

No friends, no family,
There is no one left for me,
To show me,
How great life can be.

I am all alone in this cold world,
Why is my life so horrible?
Don't I deserve happiness,
like everyone else?

Always alone that's how it will be,
Because no one can see,
that there are good things about me,
I guess this is my fate.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    So sad but really good poem
    love it very much.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Good poem
    Work on puncutation, maybe?
    But, otherwise great job, hun.
    5/5

    Btw, not EVERYONE is happy.
    I'm sure you know that, but figured I'd go ahead and say so.
    Life's hell, we just learn to deal with it, eh.
    hoping there's something better waiting for us.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Aw this is really sad. I liked the message and the idea it was heartbreaking however I think that if you added a few more metaphores and got rid of the me's and I's it would make it 10 times better.

  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    Very sad, Stephanie. I'm sure it will get better.

  • 17 years ago

    by LaRae

    I feel that.. i live that.

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