So Far Away.

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Jan 22, 2007


-Deicated To Ryan.

Wanted to write something Mysterious so I wrote a poem and I think I did pretty good.

Hidden Place,
Untold Truth,
Dark Secrets,
Unspoken Voice.

Blackened midnight,
No stars in the darkened world,
No moon to guide me,
All alone in the deep black night.

Waiting paths,
To turn it all for the worse,
Nightmare,
Just around that bend.

Split Image,
Inside, Out
Hurt, Scared,
Heartbroken, Torn.

Seconds pass slowly,
Like my heartbeat trying to go on,
Hours seem so far away, a universe between us,
I don't think I can go on for that long.

Bloody eyes,
Crying bloody tears,
Unhealed scars,
Scream to be healed.

Hollow eyes,
Nothing there,
Trying to find a scrape of emotion,
Nothing there.

Behind 20 metal bars,
Windowpane being my escape,
The only thing between,
The world and me.

I'm just so far away.

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  • 18 years ago

    by amoxi

    Very good poem it was mysterous just like you wanted it to be i liked it a lot keep it up ur a great writer 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    I've read this.
    Doubt I commented it though.

    I loved the emotion in it, hun.
    You should start using this kind of emotion in ALL of your poems. :]
    Though most have it. I"ve read a few in the past that don't.

    Loved it.
    Keep up the good work. :]
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wow! This was an amazing piece. I loved every word of it. Though a perticular stanza stood out to me...

    "Bloody eyes,
    Crying bloody tears,
    Unhealed scars,
    Scream to be healed."

    That was my favorite.

    The whole poem was beautifully written and flowed really well. 5/5

    marcella

  • 18 years ago

    by ephemera

    Opps. i did it here again too. my apologies

  • 18 years ago

    by ephemera

    This was brilliant. You aimed for something mysterious and that's exactly what you got. I thought everything about this poem was wonderful and you are an awesome poet!

    Astryd

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