My Brick Wall

by Ike Dizzle   Jan 28, 2007


My Brick Wall

Building my brick wall
To keep you out and me in
But it can only take so much
Its caving in

Get through one thing
And other problems replace it
Getting blamed for what I didn't do
By people who cant face it.

Making me feel bad
When I try to be right
Its just no pleasing them
Ill never when this fight

So Ill build my brick wall
Yeah, thats what Ill do
Ill build it strong and sturdy
So no one will get through

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  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    I like this poem. Short, but to the point and well done. It really packs a lot of ideas into it that I think we can all relate to. I certainly can. Just not wanting to be the wrong one, to be the one who is always hurt. It's just easier to hide away. Awesome job!! :)

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    I can really relate to thai poem! it's great, keep it up 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waitinf~

    p.s. i comented more, i win! lol :P

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Yup I still have my brick wall.. Ooh goodness u r so damn good! 10/10 -Nessy

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    It's sad that some feel this way, but excellent poem, well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I love the symbolic meaning of walls. We all put them up for one reason or another, but they are a double edged sword, a wall can protect us but it can also smother us. Sometimes the hardest thing is tearing down the internal walls we've constructed. An excellent poem with deep meaning.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

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