Live Only Her Own

"She doesnt even try,"
-Doesn't needs an apostrophe. :]

Hmm, first of all a really nice poem. I love how you first explain the physical features of this girl, her hair, her eyes, her frown, ect. ect. It was excellent. Then, you go on and explain how all you do is cry, you aren't overally happy with yourself and all you wish is that you could be someone else. I saw some true feelings come out and I could tell that you weren't happy with yourself for some various reasons [ like for example you say that you don't want to feel what you've felt, and that you could escape those terrible feelings.. or lets just assume they are terrible, right? :]]] okay, but anyway.. I am basically just restating what your poem was about. lmao. Don't worry about being perfect, hun.. we aren't at all perfect. We all wish we were someone else, because we aren't always happy with who we are, or what we've dealt with in our lifetimes.. We want to escape those things, but we never ever will be able to in our lifetimes.. regardless of how hard we try. Who knows if I'm even making sense here. Haha. Anyways... I absolutely love the last two lines.. they are powerful and wow'd me. It was amazing.. it just summed everything up, and kind of gave me the hope that you only deal with your own life, and not others. Which is good! :] Using the title at the end was perfect. Very fitting to the poem. Overall, excellent. 5/5.

Great poem!.. dont live anyone else's life but you own =) .. very nice job... i love your style of writing .. keep it up! flow is great.. word choice is great.. but you already know that because so many people seem to love your poems.. keep writing!

This should be inspiration beceuse we all do this sometimes Great work 5/5

I like a lot this poem cause I know what you felt when you wrote it.You have done a great job.Don't stop writing cause you're an amazing poet.Take care of you,best regards,Michelle ( that's my name,too)
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Wow, this is a really good poem. I can relate to it a lot.