Bridled

by SilentRebuke   Feb 1, 2007


Shining eyes and stolen glances
small clues to your sacred secret
Missed opening lead to lost chances
Memories you haven't built yet

Every ounce of joy coupled with sadness
Each of your smiles stunted and caged
Your deep love disguised with emptiness
To hide scars from this war you've waged

I sit back and marvel at what I can observe
Proud of your determination, your strength
I hope and pray from this course you'll not swerve,
Continue running this race through its full length.

A/N-Written Sunday night ;) Proud of ya girl

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  • 14 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I love this and it makes me want to know what you had in mind when you wrote it. lol well I guess it is up for interpratation

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Awww....it's so sweet you wrote that for her! This was an awesome poem with good rhyme and flow and such a sweet message. A new fav of mine for sure!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    You make me want to cry, Em. Thank you so much for this poem. This means so much to me! And yeah, it's hard...but what in life isn't? So thank you so much for acknowledging the difficult task in front of "us". Thanks again, girl.
    ~Midnight Sun

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