Don't be stupid, wake up

by Independence Forever   Feb 6, 2007


You are not in love
i don't care if he calls you his dove

he wants you for your touch
too bad he's doesn't love you much

you've been treated badly before
but still you go back for some more

he'll lead you on, make you think you're starting over
he then treats you like a dog, you should change your name to rover

when he's done with you, i think you'll see
but no you don't, naive you'll always be

i would love you so much
but you are blind by sin's touch

you're caught in a repeating themes
maybe you'll find the right guy, in your dreams

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  • 15 years ago

    by leah

    This is the perfect poem and i just love it. it's explainig how so many girls are but i try to keep myself out of relationships like that but they always seem to find me no mattter how hard. i try to resist.

  • 16 years ago

    by catalina

    This is very true...incredible..keep up the good work!!

  • 16 years ago

    by midnitestars89

    You hit a old nerve there, I had a boyfriend like that at one time. A lesson learned.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You've been treated badly before
    but you still go back for some more

    My favorite lines....
    Well some girls/ guys tend to do that, hold on to someone no matter what. I guess that's what low selfesteem is all about, lol.
    Beautiful poem, though!
    I'm giving you 5/5

    Take care, Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by denita

    Hey this poem is great. good job.

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