Funny

by Soraya Lowe   Feb 8, 2007


It's funny
I remember you so well
And though we've been a part for a while,
I can hardly tell

It's funny
I remember everything we used to do
We were sharing each other's laughter
It was just us two

It's funny
How I miss you so much
I never thought I'd feel this way
That parting would hurt so much

It's funny
How often I find myself thinking of you
Thinking of all the plans we'd made
Of all the things we'd never do

It's funny
It seems too sad to be true
I didn't think it would last forever
But never thought it would end so soon

It's funny
This time there's nothing I can do
So I'll just sit here
And think about being with you

...

I'm sorry that my poem isn't that good. I haven't written anything for a long time, and I'm just starting to find inspiration again.

I hope that you like it...please tell me what you think, and be honest!

Thank you!
Sydney

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I liked it alot, many people can relate to broken friendships. Good job, 5/5. Em x

  • 15 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Your repetition of "It's funny" worked really well in this, however it did get a little annoying towards the end - I will admit. The rhyme scheme you chose was very effective and it worked nicely. The flow was smooth and your word choice was simple but good.

    "How I miss you so much
    I never thought I'd feel this way
    That parting would hurt so much"
    - I don't like how you repeated "much". It threw me off a bit. But overall, you did an amazing job. (: 5/5

    Take care,
    Stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by jason

    I think it was a great poem and the rhyme scheme was really good too = ] 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The first stanza totally got me hooked. great work, the rest of the poem was excellent too. nice word choice and emotion.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    This is a good poem! i like it! keep up the good work!

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