by Emily          Feb 9, 2007
    
        category :
            Sadness, depression /
            about depression
            
    
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            Beyond the horizon | 
by bacha
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            I loved it :):):) | 
by Fay
| Wow I really liked this poem, especially the rhythm it carried in every line and it was soo simple yet deep meaning, good job ;). Plz feel free to read any of my poems and comment plz, thanku :). | 
by Espoirfailed
| This was really effective and ur simple imagery was so powerful, although from the first few lines i knew the ending of this poem b/c there are so many like this, urs was a really good one, well done |