Trapped

by Honey Kisses 18   Feb 11, 2007


Trapped within a mind
with no escape
Thorns
around my heart
yet you know not
the insidious thoughts
of my own making
crying within
surrounded by
invisible tears
no one can see
my pain

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  • 17 years ago

    by Black night

    Hey, to be honest i dont think length of a poem has anything to doing with the quality,(sorry to disagree Nick). I thought it was good, really showed your emotion. I liked the imagery used and the pace worked, it added to the melencholy atmosphere of the poem. Keep up the good work.
    -Black night-