Burnt

by xfAdInGxaWaYx   Feb 14, 2007


Your lips on mine
The feeling so fine
Nothing else matters
But soon it will be in tatters

Love's embrace
Is wonderful to taste
But consequence is soon to come
To ruin all the fun

The common mistake
He was a fake
And I believed him
But it was just a fling

I gave myself up
I thought I was tough
I knew it would happen
And still I allowed to be taken

But desperately I wanted to believe
That I was more to him here
Again I was wrong
He used me all along

Now where are you girl?
Lost in the coldness of the world
You're gone and defeated
Come away and leave it

He won't be back
There is something you lack
Now will you learn?
That love will only burn

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    This was soo good!.. i loved it!1...thanks for the comment btw haha...5/5 from me!

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Well i must say that you should try to write differently, like rhyme it differently. i hope i am not sounding cruel. just a hint to try something new. thats all.

    5/5 David

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