Wow... that was ver vivid.. It felt as if i was there. It was so sad. I almost started crying. This was so full of emotion. It flowed nicely. You did an awsome job with this. I would have woke up crying if I had a dream like this. Anyways great job on the poem.

Keep writing!
Cayce

Wow. I felt like I was there the entire time I was reading this poem. It was so sad and touching at the same time. It makes me think about all of the people that I love and how i don't want to lose them.

very good write, the descriptions were perfect. 5/5

Awww. See your truck,--it should say seeing, it sounds better.

i hate how mightmares can feel so real like that. i hope its still not bugging you.

Very vivid!

One or two little typo's but you write with a great sense of tone and rhytym without lapsing into cliche.

It's funny that this comes from a dream because I wrote one after waking up from a dream too:

http://www.helium.com/tm/103829/

Mine is unfinished but I wrote down everything that came to me in the dream.

I hate it when our dreams show us our worst nightmares, and yet we can't wake up from a dream and while it's happening, we don't know that it's not real. sorry I'm rambling, I had a horrible dream that I wrote a poem about, called through the alleyway if you wanna check it out.

annnnnyways, i loved the great description you put into it, so sad i was almost crying whilst reading it, if a poem evokes that much emotion in someone then you know that its a good one 5/5

Wow scary dream great poem tho. Great job

Wow this poem was amazing and so well written i could see it all in my head as i was reading it, it brought tears to my eyes it was fantastic i loved it 5/5