My Struggle

by jarrod   Feb 18, 2007


My escalator turned on
and now I am tired
going up the down
I must be faster

People in the center
will block my path
I'm pushed to the side
they coast on
they think im wrong
instead im right

i'd really like to turn
take the easy path
My back to failure
and my face to success
even as such
I near more to failure

why won't they move
and let me on by
on this escalator
there's room for two!

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  • 16 years ago

    by marilyn marti

    Great poem Jarrod, as always. I really loved the meaning behind it. Great way of expressng it tho. Well just wanted to stop by. U take care-n i dont even kno if u remember who i am. but anywho lol. Take care again. Later. >>>>5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nicely written, and had a wonderful messege within. I can relate and I'm sure many others can as well. The flow as well as the structure was good. Can't wait to read some more from you. Keep up the excellent work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by beav

    Great concept. i liked the 'inner dialogue' aspect. i felt a lot of frustration. i really enjoy your style. similar to mine. :) 5 for you! -beav

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    I think this is something we can all relate to. I try not to struggle though. It just isn’t helpful, plus it takes my attention away from the many little beauties of life.
    Sometimes the harder path does more good to us than the easy one. but you’re quite right. I agree with you about the last stanza. The majority of people are like that. ‘tis sad.
    thanks for again sharing your poems with us :)
    Marjan

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was sad. You did a wonderful job making your point. Take Care Cindy

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