A walk in the rain.

by Isabelle   Feb 18, 2007


Outside,
I see the rain,
falling,
falling into the earth.
It's hard to see in between my tears, and the rain.

I walk inside,
into my room,
just to cry.
Just to cry with the earth,
we cry together!

My fear of losing,
is overwhelming.

I look at the window,
and see the rain trickle down the window pane,
unleashing the pain from within.

When the rain falls,
my heart just dies,
my world cascades down into the oblivion.

A walk in the rain,
just to cry,
is the secret,
to my living.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rebecca

    Excellent poem. The imagery is so profound. Keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Remmi

    Woah. I really liked that poem and it really put into words how you feel. Great job Isabelle!!

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    That was a very interesting style. I did however liked it. I loved your use of words. I'm sorry I don't have time to make a good comment, but I have to go. You did a good job writing it though.

    Just to cry with the earth,
    we cry together!
    ^^I really enjoyed that part!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 17 years ago

    by Elizabetta

    Wow. This is really deep. Good job, again, Isabelle! This is definatly a unique and wonderful poem!

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