Salvation

by Georgi   Feb 21, 2007


Adored intoxication,
Flows smoothly through her veins,
Uncontrolled infatuation;
A heated taste of rain

She argues for salvation.
A discreet determination
In loves sweet animation,
She believes.

Serendipity so sweet
Based on feeling incomplete
And reaching out
In furtive doubt
To fears she cant defeat.

Oh beauty's preservation,
Of the sacred human heart,
Love is continuation.
And in you,
Here lies the start.

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  • 16 years ago

    by cassanova

    I love your poem check out my "I WISH" poem i think you will like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Pesamenteiro

    Great wording and flow.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great beginning and an ending. Beautifully written piece, I enjoyed in it very much.
    Third stanza is my favorite.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I like your word choices in this poem, they were great. the poem it self was a great write. you have done a great job dear.keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Perfect rhyme scheme and flow....great word choices.....full of emotion

    Oh beautys preservation,
    Of the sacred human heart,
    Love is continuation.
    And in you,
    Here lies the start.

    ^ love this last verse.....the beauty of love shines through! All the best, Debbie

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