by Cathy Feb 21, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Theres no way out I'm screaming in pain |
This was a great poem...really dark...and the way you described everything made me feel like I was in it, too...thats awesome...keep em cumin! :) |
Death can sometimes be beautiful but never forced. Life will always rise above death, no matter what. Very well written, only that the end there might be a few mistakes. spelling. I did like it a lot anyway. Reminds me of a nirvana song. |
by LittleWolf
Thw beginning was truly awesome.. the sphere and everything was there, only too bad it ended a little more into a good end than it first looked like, but still very good. |