Winter's Night

by Angie   Feb 24, 2007


Winter's Night

outside our cottage window
from clouds both dark and gray
the landscape is slowly covered in white
as the snow fairies flitter and play

safely tucked away inside
on a blanket of silver lace
my lover and I are snuggled
in front of the fireplace

sipping hot chocolate
nibbling on pop tarts
blueberry flavored kisses
love and passion in our hearts

this dream is more than fleeting
such love dwells in this place
of cottage and snow fairies
of pop tarts and silver lace

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nix

    I like it very much. Atmosphere is superbly created and imagery is amazing. You described emotions excellently. Metaphors are great too. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    Thank you for all the comment, it is much appreciated. This poem made me feel like it was winter again, the imagry nicely put. I like the added pop tarts bit.

  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel J

    That was really nice. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :p

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so beautiful, I adore this poem.
    I thought the first stanza was such a great opener and it just kept getting better.
    The imagery used created vivid pictures for me and made me all smiley.
    The flow was flawless, I love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This makes me think of beautiful country paintings and an idyllic existence of lovers inside while outside the landscape reflects the romance, contentment and beauty within.
    Peace, Love, Poetry & Power,
    Gary Jurechka

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