Time Without You [Acrostic ]

by Twisted Heart   Feb 25, 2007


Tis but a voice that I remember
Inside the mind I see your face
Mere words that hold you in my arms
Enveloped by both time and space

Within the eye that holds my soul
Into the pain that falls on me
Tender hurt has come to follow
Hindered by the ecstasy.
Only trueth can guide our path
Underneath the stars above
Taking all the hurt and sorrow

Yeilding to undying love
Open wounds now go unmended
Unsure of what true love intended

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  • 14 years ago

    by East Poetry

    TIME WITH OUT YOU.... I really like how it spells that out. My favorite stanza is the first one.

    I think you miss spelled truth in the middle stanza.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Lovely poem. It has a great flow and wonderful word choice. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Oh, perfect! That was wonderful, a good and rhythmic acrostic poem is hard to off, especially with rhyme as well!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Wow this was a deep and well written touching poem...congrats on a great write..nuff luv xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    Great poem. The word choice was excellent. Good job 5/5

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