I miss you

by Kaila   Feb 25, 2007


I miss the way you smelt of pine
I miss the way you held your hand in mine

I miss the way you held me tight
I miss the way you said goodnight

I miss the way you kissed my for head
I miss the way you put me to bed

I miss the way your hugs felt
I miss the way your clothes smelt

I miss you day and night
I miss you when I shut my eyes tight

I miss you when your not here
I miss you when I'm in fear

I miss the times you threw me in the air
I miss the times you always cared

I miss the way you held me tight
I miss the way we said goodnight

*I know this is kinda dumb and it's about my dad I miss him everyday and I really wanted to write something knew so if you dont like it I'm sorry and I know it might sound dumb with the rhyming but this is how I feel*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    I loved the repition that you have used take care good work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awww..its not dumb i liked it..very good poem =) but i just sorta think its too much i miss...lol but thts just me

  • 17 years ago

    by Perfection

    Listen there is no need to explain yourself when u write something.
    This was pretty good but I would like it if u removed that coment about it beeing dumb.
    Poetry is a great tribute so never hesitate... =)

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    This isn't dumb at all, it is very emotional and very hard to think about, all the pain you must of gone through, great write keep it up i enjoy readin your stuff

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This isn't dumb at all sweetie, it's filled with emotion, pain and longing, anyone with brains can see that.
    The repetition worked nicely in thus, you did a wonderful job.

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