by XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX Feb 27, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Trust is such a simple word, |
by Kaila
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Nice job good wording! I liked the emotion it flowed nicely too I loved this one nice job |
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Ooh. i liked this one! betrayal is really shown thru your words. good work babe |
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*spelled with such ease, * |
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Exquisite! Great use of vocabulary & nice rhyme'in. Keep it up. 5/5 |
by Chelsea
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Wow that is the total truth actually. trust is something that you think you have from all of your friends but if you think about it something is going to get out from most of those people. it is hard to find and everyones lucky when they found it in someone. good work |