Under the tree

by waiting 4 some1   Mar 2, 2007


We were the only ones,
we were the only two.

when we sat under the tree,
when the sky was blue.

i said i love you,
you said i love you too.

back then i realized it wasn’t a dream,
i realized then, it was something true.

i have felt something strange inside me,
something i haven’t been through.

it was a desire to be forever with you,
a desire to stick with you like glue.

until one of us die one day,
or i get dumped by you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Adel my little bro,

    Such a sweet little love poem by you!
    I really love the last two lines...so cute.
    I hope she stays with you forever!

    Greetings from you big sis,

    5/5 Ingridxx

  • 16 years ago

    by whatzupplz

    I really like the rythem of the poem very well written keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    It was a desire to be forever with you,
    a desire to stick with you like glue.

    ^^ lol aw thats cute. This was a really sweet poem, great message and flow.

    Take Care:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Beautiful poem and I accept your offer! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    This was a good poem. The rhythm and flow was short and sweet.

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