by Infected with His Deadly Love Mar 4, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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As I gaze into your eyes |
by Kaila
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Nice job I could tell there was a little bit of near rhyme or from my point there was nice job! |
by ChaoticallyMe
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Nice and direct with the message...which works at times. The main point of my message usually gets lost with having too many ideas. Way to keep it clear :) |
by Allison
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Wow....this was purely beautiful. Keep up the good work. *5/5* |
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And what a beautiful poem :] It flowed really well, even though there was no rhyme structure.. it was still very amazing! It didn't take away from the poem at all, maybe even made it better. It had so much emotion & love in it :] |