by kida Mar 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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You are the heart that beats inside my chest |
by skynerraw
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Awesome:) |
by Sara
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That was really very cute!....that was awesome!...5/5 from me...comment back? |
by Skyfire
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Just a thought...The 'you' at the beginning of the second stanza needs an 'are' after it. Other than that, awesome. |
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Awe its sweet. well written 5/5 |