Perfect Bliss(Triolet)

Excellent triolet. I like this type of poetry. I think I wrote one of those before, but this was better than mine hehe :p. But this poem was beautiful and I really enjoyed reading it.

-Shannon <3

Short and sweet this poem is truly very good I liked it alot

A nicely written Triolet. Though tersely expressed, the descriptions certainly encompass so much.

"I'm awarded by perfect bliss"

To be in love is indeed wonderful; it makes you realize your true self within when you're ON it. So cute.

This is beautiful with good choice of words and beautiful lines. Well described what perfect bliss means. Great indeed

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Fsams

At least you have a good outlook in your poems. Most of the love poems here belong in the sad category