Definition Of Frustration

by Tricky Daze   Sep 4, 2007

Staring at a fake scape with blank eyes;
So many sweet lies written at its back.
On hall-stand I hung my disguise,
Watching my life again to be wrack.

A smiling face hides a stale heart;
Nobody should see these fatal tears.
If this girl had a way to restart,
She would end her life that despairs.

To be gone many years ago;
Had some happy chuckle on lips,
No any betrayal or to endlessly grow,
Only tender touch of death on my tips.

Trauma lectures all memories;
Releases entire lived chances.
My heart bleeds at sceneries,
For the one merely took glances.

Just a blink in life initiated passion;
Yet simply a glance got me frustrated.
His lips kissed a girl with compassion,
As she hands a baby to this black hearted.

Solaced myself at old things that was his,
Trying hard not to lose my conscious espirit.
But what hurts my broken heart the most is;
Being obligated to carry his four month old one in me.

© 2007 Tricky Daze


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  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Oh i was not expecting that ending..but I could definitely feel the pain and frustration. I really like your style and how it pushes past structure and the rules of grammar at takes courage to attempt such a style. The flow was well and the metaphors were great. Keep it up.

  • 14 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    I think that thsi poem is well written.. I liked that you have put so much emotion and depth into your writing... I really dont know what else to say...

    great job

  • 14 years ago

    by Veamm

    The emotions is well delivered..nicely done!!

    keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by JaM

    Wow, this is an amazing poem. Very sad but I liked the words you used and the way you used them. Great write.

  • 14 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. it was a situation i'm sure alot of people have had to face, it was a deep write, i loved it. 5/5

    Solaced myself at old things that was his,
    Trying hard not to lose my conscious espirit.

    my fave lines ^^