Cross Of Fates [Collab]

by Tricky Daze   Sep 10, 2007


At many ups and downs of life;
There stood a shadow by my side.
A friend but an angel for me,
Now it's clear for everyone to see.

Where delusive smirks deceive;
Innocent souls to diverge completely.
When everything is hard to believe,
A shattered heart took my back sweetly.

Every time that things are going to be tied;
Showing me the eyes of caring light.
To have someone always spreading arms,
It's making me feel friendship charm.

Two arms to cry on, one heart to share;
All I have for you, nothing as plurality.
In every petty handicap I will dare,
For you till I lose all my individuality.

This is a collab with Hassan aka Forever In Love.
You can check him out at;
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=42982

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  • 16 years ago

    by Simply Josh

    Two arms to cry on, one heart to share;
    All I have for you, nothing as plurality.
    Love that. Great work again Laura. It really captures things from the heart and excellent word usage. Keep writing

    cheers, josh

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    i love the concept of it, the start up to the end it fits right its topic. it flowed nicely!

    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Patience

    Well done. I think you both did an amazing job with this collab. Great job.

    Cicely

  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    This was indeed an unique poem, and was very pretty; but, I had a hard time trying to understand every line of it so I could get a complete picture of the poem and picture it in my head. I think I had a hard time because of the broken english; but, besides all that, I thought this was quite pretty and showed to me some deep emotions which I appreciate. I loved the second stanza, and the last line of the poem because it changes the whole mood, effectively, and helps me get into the poems meaning a bit more. You are a good writer, so don't quit.

    Take care, Tricky tricky! =]

    ~Richieee

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Beautifully written friendship poem, I like it from the beginning to the end. Truly great collab, all stanzas are equally good. I like the choice of words and the rhymes are not too typical which is excellent.
    Whole message and the topic of the piece are very positive.
    5/5 from me

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