by Kristina Mar 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Why isn't life fair? |
by Vanessa
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This one is perfect, i couldn't find a thing wrong with it. You shared your feeling very well, and the flow was great. 5/5 |
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I love how you make each poem diffent and have it's own spirt. |
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Very varied rhyme scheme, which can be hard to follow at times. |