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by Tricky Daze Mar 11, 2007
Love, romance /
i love you
The times when you feel so alone
Like you're always on your own
When you feel your words start to fall
Be my only perfection of all
When birds sing in the air happily
But you're too sad to hear
When spring is in the air and flowers grow
Bring me to life with your hugs and glow
When you love someone from your heart
But it isn't enough to be loved
When all you can see your love is dreams
Reach me and quiet me with kisses
When the places that you called paradise
Change and turn hell
When people you thought they're nice...
Take me out this marsh I fell
When surprisingly things take your back
Your life seems something
Your future stopped whining
Smile me gently and say I was the lack
by Catastrophic Beauty
Very touching. I dont neccessarily like the mixed up rhyming scheme. or is this free verse? I don't know, but I did enjoy this poem. I loved how you wrote the last line in each stanza. Very sweet and effective. 5/5
This poem flows very well and te rhyming of the last two lines of each stanza again reflects you style very much I really like this one good poem.
Truly beautiful poem, I like the rhymes and the way you expressed emotions.
by The Sky is Falling
Wow, this poem was very touching.I loved this poem. Keep up the amazing work. Written very well 5/5
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Awesome work, everything flows so nicely. I give this poem 5/5 as well, keep writing im going to look at more of your work!