Lips Of An Angel - Ottava Rima

by Gem   Mar 13, 2007


Those lips of an angel get me every time
So luscious and soft and so heavenly
They start to move closer until they brush mine
Kissing me softly and so sensually
I start getting tingles up and down my spine
As you lay me down on the pillows gently
You smile and tell me you love me so much
Still driving me crazy with your teasing touch

Those lips of an angel are smiling so sweet
Lulling me into a state of sheer bliss
Whispering sweet words, my heart skips a beat
Feels like I'm falling in a love filled abyss
If this was a tape I'd keep it on repeat
I just want to stay locked in your angel kiss
This whole entire night just feels so surreal
These feelings I have, I just can't conceal

Those lips of an angel now start to explore
I bask in the pleasure your teasing provides
As our clothes fall into a heap on the floor
I love the feeling as our skin collides
Feeling a sensation I've not felt before
It's all because of this love you've supplied
I reach out and trace the smile on your face
I feel so lucky wrapped in your embrace

Those lips of an angel now kiss me with care
And then we begin and it just feels so right
You've shown me that there's no need to be scared
I look deep in your eyes and hold you so tight
Then my body feels like it's floating on air
And I've reached a place where my heart takes flight
We lay close together, bodies intertwined
Those lips of angel get me every time ©

*Gem*

This type of poem is a poem written in 8-line octaves. Each line is of a 10 or 11 syllable count in the following rhyme:
One stanza poem. a, b, a, b, a, b, c, c
Two stanza poem. a, b, a, b, a, b, c, c. d, e, d, e, d, e, f, f
Three stanza poem. a, b, a, b, a, b, c, c. d, e, d, e, d, e, f, f. g, h, g, h, g, h, i, i ... so on and so on

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  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Congrats on placing in rachel's contest....nicely done...you deserve it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sammib

    Really nicely done!! Congratulations on pulling off the style! Great attention holder...

    Sammib

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    O m g! i loved this poem. the words the lines everythng. hey download this song: lips of an angel - hinder its the best song i thought of it when i read the title. neway great poem!! keep em coming xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Lips of an angel, well brings back memories lol ok i'll stop there lol a beautifully amazing poem Gem god love ya :)) 99/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    This was so amazingly written. You really have special talent.
    I loved it.