Peaceful river

by Independence Forever   Mar 14, 2007


Oh river, where do you lead me?
what do you wish me to see?

if you take me to war, i hesitatingly go
or to peace, i wish that i did know

steady ripples seem like they guide my boat
a cold chill, but not enough for to wear a coat

the quietness is almost eerie, but soothes the soul
i don't know where i am being taken, or what is my goal

the coolness of the river regenerates my life
and it makes me feel good about being in strife

float down my river, if you need help in things
the river can help you, with all that it brings

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  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda

    Amazing write...Def. 5/5!
    -Amanda

  • 17 years ago

    by Black night

    Liked this, however, thought it wasnt as good as your others, it just seemed a little forced. It was still really good mind...
    -Black night-

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    I really like this..its def a great read...100% 5/5 from me great jobb!!! comment back?

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    This is a great poem i like it alot, i dont know why but i just like this one a hole ton. i think this is my new fave.
    nessa