Just shut up

I like how this poem is so "in your face". Great job.

[tragic]

Heey, awesome job girl :D
When I read the title I was like " Oh yeah! " :D
It's perfect. :D I loved it. You like show that you'll be just fine by your own, and you don't need that guy - or whoever you mean - by your side. That's what I call a good attitude!
My favorite part was:
If there's nothing you can say
just shut up
and walk away
I don't think you need help with it!
It's just perfect!

Best of wishes!
Take care

Ok so i like this one. but idk so much about the last stanza. its a lot different then the others and it doesnt quite make sense to me

I don't know why you would need help I thought this poem made perfect sense I loved it a lot!

I think this one is great.
i love it.
-deadbeatromance