Hoe does it feel?

by fvalconbridge   Mar 15, 2007


How does it feel if youâ??ve lost everything
Your world, sky and hope
But itâ??s a bitter sweet remedy
For fear and rejection are lost too
How would you feel if you lost everything?
Youâ??re lover, dreams and pain,
What a juxta-position, an oxymoron,
Rhetorical question?
How can you lose everything?
Because bad things are lost
Leaving only good in itâ??s wake.
But the good are swallowed,
Eaten and spat out
Leaving only hate and burning pain
What a predicament to be in,
How wouldnâ??t you feel if you lost everything?
Nothing?
Thereâ??s no such thing.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    That's right, you can't loose everything until you are dead... I guess... ha ha... Well even after that, you still have everything that is left behind you....5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by SEAN

    A nice play on words in the title and the juxtaposing concept was brilliant
    great work

  • 17 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    When people read poems, they should always vote and comment, 5/5 ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    How would you feel if you lost everything?

    aaaaaaaaaaaaaw words are not enough to explain this... i liked ur poem take care

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