I get lonely sometimes.
So lonely I feel I could die.
And its in the late of night when I close my eyes,
When I realise what Ive become.
The one I didn't want to be.
Its my own icy heart that has made me this way.
You see, I got hurt, real bad.
And it shattered my soul.
The part of a person that makes them feel,
The part that makes them alive.
And I was left broken, half a person.
I was kind of stuck in a somnambular haze,
I felt lost in this world.
I didn't belong there anymore.
I'm not one of them.
Now I'm trapped here,
not understanding there thoughts and reasoning.
And now I lay here,
My cheeks wet and my chest hollow.
Not knowing who I am anymore.
And no-one knowing my ways.
The aches too much to bare as the night falls.
And the rest of my soul leaves me,
Piece by piece.
I get lonely at night,
And I fear I might die.
Very well written. The pain is so utterly evident it sucks the reader in. It flows and the structure fits the story well. I dig the use of somnambular too! Wonderfully penned!
10 years ago
by Broken Masquerade
Wowww. This is so heartfelt! It's so good that you can express you're emotions like that. It's such a relatable poem and captivates the reader from line 1. I love the lines "My cheeks wet and my chest hollow. Not knowing who I am anymore." I can really relate to that. This was amazingly written. I loved reading it, well done :D 5/5 for suree :)
10 years ago
That brought back a few memories and recents ones too so it hurt.
I can totally relate