Lonely

by fvalconbridge   Jul 16, 2007


I get lonely sometimes.
So lonely I feel I could die.
And its in the late of night when I close my eyes,
When I realise what Ive become.
The one I didn't want to be.
Its my own icy heart that has made me this way.
You see, I got hurt, real bad.
And it shattered my soul.
The part of a person that makes them feel,
The part that makes them alive.
And I was left broken, half a person.
After this,
I was kind of stuck in a somnambular haze,
I felt lost in this world.
I didn't belong there anymore.
I'm not one of them.
Now I'm trapped here,
not understanding there thoughts and reasoning.
And now I lay here,
My cheeks wet and my chest hollow.
Not knowing who I am anymore.
And no-one knowing my ways.
The aches too much to bare as the night falls.
And the rest of my soul leaves me,
Piece by piece.
I get lonely at night,
And I fear I might die.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Alex D

    Very well written. The pain is so utterly evident it sucks the reader in. It flows and the structure fits the story well. I dig the use of somnambular too! Wonderfully penned!

  • 14 years ago

    by Broken Masquerade

    Wowww. This is so heartfelt! It's so good that you can express you're emotions like that. It's such a relatable poem and captivates the reader from line 1. I love the lines "My cheeks wet and my chest hollow. Not knowing who I am anymore." I can really relate to that. This was amazingly written. I loved reading it, well done :D 5/5 for suree :)

  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Ouch.
    That brought back a few memories and recents ones too so it hurt.
    I can totally relate
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Wow, what a way to express such hurt and heart ache. I really enjoyed this. I read it three times.

    I was kind of stuck in a somnambular haze,

    I definetly took a moment a looked that word up. Half awake half dreaming. I LOVE IT.

    nice one.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tim Mauntler

    Loved it
    I can't relate myself, but I've felt things close to it...
    like moonlight said, great word choice
    can't wait to read more
    tim

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