Alone

by Marc Ortiz   Mar 15, 2007


Wondering why I exist in this world
Is it to seek happiness or glory?
I say neither I seek love above all
Do I need her to be here beside me?
Do I need her to love, with all her heart?
My girl is all I need in this harsh life
Will she ever feel affection for me?
Or are we just friends through eternity?
Girl, did you ever loved me with all your
Heart? Did you? Do you love me? Seriously??!
No dirty secrets? Come on tell me, please
Reveal the truth my beautiful angel
Girl, you are all I need in this harsh life!

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  • 16 years ago

    by dawn green

    Very touching, keep up the good work!
    god bless!

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    Well I must be jaded, The work as a whole flowed and the message was clear sad but clear, and the images you portaid were fine all and all a good poem. Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    Hey great poem keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    "Wondering why I exist in this world
    Is it to seek happiness or glory?"
    Beautiful lines...the poem is short but filled with emotions and last line is sweet!...the whole write is short and simple..well-said indeed!..kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hehehe thanks for make me smile... the last lines really make me smile coz it was so sweet and ur really express ur love as a teenager and i was remember when i was at ur age.. well just keep on writing all what u feel little boy.. im enjoyed reading this one...

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