Hiding from Reality

by XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX   Mar 20, 2007


A tendency,
Toward fantasy,
A mythical illusion.
Darkness brightened,
Senses heightened,
With the power of one's mind.
Dark salvation,
No hesitation,
Fear forgot of the unknown.
Reach inside,
Hide behind,
A wall of isolation.
Light endorsed,
Shadows forced,
To crawl into extinction.
Slip away,
From decay,
Encircling your existence.
Forget deprivation,
Loose aggravation,
Release all of your despise.
Eternal bliss,
Nothing missed,
In the world of all your own.

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  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Incredible poem once more and a flawless flow. I loved this. Great job! Nice work!

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I liked the format...and I didn't.
    The pace was quick and desperate therefore in tone with the poem subject. However, the occasional rhyme seemed sudden and clumsy, maybe no rhyme would have been more effective.
    I liked your diction....again it worked with the message you were trying to portray.
    Your work proceeds your years. I didn't even start writing till I was 15, let alone be quite mastered at it. Keep writing, you've got talent.
    Oh and I hope you had a nice birthday lol I read it was the beginning of this month.

  • 18 years ago

    by beav

    Yup. i really like this one. this is totally like my writing style. has a powerful message and a lot of content in and between the lines. excellent job here!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow thats good, i like how you have layed it out and the wording you have used, well done xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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