Ton Amour

by PygmyPuff   Mar 20, 2007


Take a look in your eyes,
Caress the silken petal,
I feel a deep breath rising in my soul.
Filling with the fresh scents,
and I shiver.
Your purity inspires me,
Addicted to your glamorous spell.
The serenity is impulsive,
An ecstasy,
Fades away to die.
The blossom withers,
Drowning in the blood.
A treasured memory remains,
Broken.
Empty.
Lost at Sea.

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  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Loved it. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Drusus Bathory

    On the contrary I thought the use of the slightly larger words held the piece together, without them, I don't think it would have worked at all but with them its lovely. Well thought out too in that respect.

    Drusus

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I liek this one...

    but idk what all the words mean,

    but the big words make it more sophisticated

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Whoa. that was a beautiful read. why do ppl not comment you! THEY SHOULD! its nice poetry!!!!! whats ton amour? haha something love, but what language? 5/5.

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