Because of you

by xo kisses xo   Mar 22, 2007


Because of you, she was so strong.
Because of you, everything went wrong.

Because of you, she has a broken heart.
Because of you, she was ripped apart.

Because of you, she has to hide a frown.
Because of you, her world has crumbled down.

Because of you, she cries herself to sleep.
Because of you, she's alone and weak.

Because of you, she held so much pain.
Because of you, her life had nothing to gain.

Because of you, she's used to the tears.
Because of you, she's lived in pain all these years.

Because of you, her feelings she had to hide.
Because of you, she commited suicide.

Because of you, her heart was never whole.
Because of you, death took its toll.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    OMG!!! Girl this is sooooo good its sad tho but its sooo good...

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Aww... So sweetly written.. Loved it.. So sad but still so wonderful..
    >keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    I really liked the flow of this and the layout. Despite that it's a little cliché, it was nicely done and I could defintely see the images you were holding for the reader to see. Great Job.

  • 17 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    Well done, very good. like the idea of the repeating line!
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by stefanie

    Wow. this one really speaks out to me. it kinda scares me in a way cuz i can relate but i don't want to end up like the end of this poem. but its like a reality check. but this is a great poem and its really deep. its really meaningful. please keep up the good work.

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