Im not sure.. suggestions welcome

by Your Best Mistake Your Perfect Failure   Mar 23, 2007


The statements you make, '
leave me with my bewailing state of mind
Now because of you i cry.. every night,
i die inside..

The pain from your lies i can no longer hide
I can no longer live a normal life..
With this mistake, my own failure at my side..

You act if this amuses
you,
just as the beatings you give our daughter leaving
bruises..
You sick twisted being...
I hope something kills you, even if it has to be: Me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Your Best Mistake Your Perfect Failure

    What in the hell are you talking about.. @@@@ me..

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    WOW that was intense, i love the build in this and how fomr the very virst word to he last, ech word is picked so carefully...amazing job

    melissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Your Best Mistake Your Perfect Failure

    Let This Poem Scream Of The Hate And Anger That I Hold Inside..
    I Cry With Blood Of Others..
    I Hate You All, You All Think You Know The Real Me. But You KNOW NOTHING

  • 17 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    That was really dark. The poem seemed like it was filled with a lot of pain and anger.

  • 17 years ago

    by Carisa

    Gosh...

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