Crying for so long...

by Rikki   Mar 24, 2007


A boy and a girl laughing,
Happy as can be
She puts a hand to her stomach
And thinks of two becoming three

She loved him so much
Even after every mistake
Even after all he's done to her
He's the only one she'd take.

He said he loved her
And wanted her forever
But not once was he telling the truth
He hadn't loved her, never!

You know how she knows?
Well it's simple, really
It's the reason he's in jail
probably feeling a bit queasy

He's in for rape
The girl was only 14
And there was another
And she was barely 16.

And yet another sad part
to this sad, sad story
was that all these girls were mislead
by a boy who was just horny

When the first one realized
that all of this had been a lie
For the first few months
all she could do was cry.

After crying for so long
her eyes finally dried
But not til after the rope
and the note explaining why she died.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hi gurl :) long time no comment. wow. that was really good work! you've improved so much since I last saw u! well written. keep working at it babe :) i really loved ur imagry and your word use and ur structure *Grins* .... hard story to work with and you did a really great job. hope it's not u :)

    *hugs*

    Ruthie })i({

  • 17 years ago

    by XSugarSexSuicideX

    That's so sad...unfortunately, it happens, even in our society...way to put in words what some people cannot even speak of.

    ~~Rikki...aka SSS~

  • 17 years ago

    by Milton

    Is this story real? I hope it's not someone you know, this guy looks like a real loser. you're real good with wiritng feelings down in your poems. good stuff =)