Dad??

by Baby Rainbow   Mar 24, 2007


You held me up so high
so i could touch the sky
you pushed me on the swing
until the chains began to cling

you tickled me until i showed a smile
made the time pass for a while
you always took me to the park
took me home before it grew dark

you left my curtains open at night
so i could watch the stars shine bright
you gave me everything i wanted
everything i needed

when did it change dad
why did you change?

saffie
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  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Sad.. i feel it. <3 great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    I can relate to that poem. But with my mom not my dad. Its hard when those kind of things happen. If you ever need to talk I am always here. but anyways great poem

    xx
    chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by AMoreMIo

    I really like this poem it show a lot of love..and then it got sad in the end it was really good

  • 17 years ago

    by naomi

    Sad poem hun but i luv it xxx keep writin these brill poems xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I liked how u didnt no wat happened at the end, however if u can try to make things up with ur dad (not that i no wats going on so sorry to intrude) please do, i lost my dad last month and i regret every second i didnt spend with him, well written poem tho

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