The Failed Escape

by Jenni Marie   Mar 26, 2007


Running along the floor
Heart pounding in my chest
Trying my hardest to get away
Before he sends me to my death.

Surroundings are just a blur
As I continue to speed on by
Want to curl up in a ball
No time to stop and cry.

Coming to the edge of the rooftop
Heart plummeting at the fifty foot drop
Chancing a glance behind me
Realizing there's no time to stop.

Leaping onto the grass below
Whole body shuddering with impact
Knowing I have to keep on moving
When I realize I'm still intact.

Weaving through people
He's still somewhere behind
So overcome with terror
Feel like I'm out of my mind.

Tripping over my own feet
Righting myself in haste
Needing to get out of here fast
Knowing a second's to much to waste.

Blood all over my body and clothes
From where he stuck the knife in before
Running as fast as I possibly can
Yet everything seems so slow.

Charging into the nearest store
Making a beeline for the phone
Suddenly the store is empty
I'm in this place alone.

Hearing the door open behind me
Turning slowly around
Thought I was almost safe
But now, I have been found.

Staring at the mask he's wearing
Wondering why I came to this place
Now there's no time left to wonder
'Cause he just aimed his gun at my face.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Wow! This poem is SO unbelievably powerful! I mean that was just incredible. Absolutely wonderful job! I think I liked it the most because it was so to the point. There was no jumping around the subject, it was what it was. And for that, kudos to you! :) You are going in my favorites cause I really love your style! I can't wait to read more!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 16 years ago

    by Elyse

    Wow really liked it....made me wanna keep reading good job! love the ending!
    Elyse

  • 16 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    You actually had me scared for a minute lol. Again the flow was great and I loved the story behind it. Really didn't get what it was exactly about but I really enjoyed this poem I kind of made up my own story for it. Great job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Wow!!! i have chills! Very well written! Flawless flow. Fantastic!! 5/5

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by Linden

    Takes away my breathe once again.
    Simply amazing.

    5/5

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