A Girl Who...

by just me   Apr 2, 2007


A girl who loves optimism
but rarely feels it.
Has experienced pain
more than a little bit.
Confused between two
but doesn't know who to choose.
Fears making a decision
because either way she'll lose.
Wishes she knew what to do
but she doesn't.
Wants to stop caring but knows she can't and she mustn't.
Wants a trip inside his heart
to know what he really feels.
Wants to believe his words
but doesn't know if they're real.
She's also a girl who smiles
and even laughs.
When you're sad she'll tell a joke
just on your behalf.
Listens to your troubles
and gives her best advice.
You know she cares;
you don't even have to think twice.
Even though she has her own problems
she looks at yours with importance.
Gives love and care
in great abundance.
Strives for optimism
even though her life is in a uproar.
Smiles inspite of herself,
Because she knows there's something more.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Good job on this!
    i can relate to it very well!
    keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by TracyM

    I like this one, sad ad yet beautifully written, well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Kendra

    As they said, this is very easy to relate to. Great poem, keep writing, 5/5

    ~Kendra~

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    Great poem! like people said before it was very easy to realte to, amazing work!!

    0-----tara

  • 17 years ago

    by sian

    I really liked this, it was simple and sweet, I felt I could really relate to it. sian x