by Coeur Cassa Sage Apr 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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There was a man |
by Midnight Sun
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Comment #5: |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
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The rhyming made he reading easy and smooth. however, it didn't fully flow. |
by ChaoticallyMe
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Don't you know not to talk to strangers? haha..just kidding...a great sense of compassion and how society is in that poem...good job :) |