Apology To You

by Cherise   Apr 3, 2007


I've been here many times before,
must I bother anymore?
I just find myself where I fell
I've become to know this punishment well

I hate to cry, but it's all I do,
But not all these tears fall for you,
It's just many people screwed with my mind
Nothing can heal it, not even time.

I'm always angry, it's not my way,
Still I feel like this everyday
It's just because your feelings changed
and mine, remained the same.

I make you cry, I hate it too
The last thing I want to do is torture you,
But I'm very glad you have found the time
and gave me back what was mine.

I've been upset, I live the blues,
But I try to be happy because of you
A lot of people just looked and left me there,
but your the one who always cared.

I may be angry, and always cry,
but you can't ask, you know very well why.
I just hope you know what you mean to me
because you're the only one that sees.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ivkr81

    <<in fact, upon re-reading it, i think I almost want to email it to someone...>> :)

  • 17 years ago

    by ivkr81

    I really like this poem--you express a range of emotions, but all tied in together nicely. the rhymes work really well too...not sing-songy at all.

    although I dont know what it's about necessarily, it hit close to home, invoking a feeling about someone that I have yet to put into words--nice that you could do it for me! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    I really liked the rhymes in this poem. The romance essence was there and it was really good. I think your poem is better than my Sonnet, since I'm trying it. I'm slowly getting it down.

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    "I've been upset, I live the blues,
    But I try to be happy because of you"

    I know how that feels though mine is a different case. Keep it up, great poem and nice emotions.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Wow, I liked this one. It has a very unusual rhyme scheme, but I think you mastered it. It's good that you're such a caring person to him, a lot of people would have just left but you two are still together and in loooooove:) and if you can get through this, you can get through anything. Good work.

    I found a grammar mistake;)

    but your the one who always cared.

    it should be "you're"

    --Steph

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