The Rambler

by Cherise   Apr 3, 2007


He sits in the cafe all by himself
Has no faith, no heaven, no hell
He hums along to the sound of his keys
He's the rambler ,that nobody sees

He sits up straight, walks with his head high.
Yea his life's not great, but he's glad he's alive.
Has so many bruises, but they never show,
He's the rambler,that nobody knows.

He walks in the house, sits himself down,
after chillen with bohemians on the other side of town.
His mother disowned him, father never gives him a glance
He's the rambler, who never got a chance.

You sit in the cafe all by yourself
You have no faith ,no heaven ,no hell.
A man sits beside you, a face that you knew,
He's the rambler, he's talking to you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    A unique write that I truly enjoyed. It all flowed flawlessly and the mood you created with your language was beautiful. The descriptions were amazing, I felt as if I was seeing everything witth my own eyes. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I loved this one to
    Because its a great poem
    and i liked the flow
    and it rhymed well
    and it never seemed forced

    and i loved your choice of words

    and the ending was a great way to end it

    a well deserved

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ivkr81

    Wow...I really like this one. It is concise, but very expressive. It reminds me of catching someones eye as you pass them on the street...knowing you have some unspoken connection to them, but you'll never see them again... <sorry, kind of off on my own thought there...>anyway, great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Nice job on this poem!..

    "Your sit in the cafe all by yourself"
    [I think you meant 'you']

    Again I liked the rhymes in this poem. Good stuff on this one. It was a weird read, but it's interesting. Reminded me of the song, 'the Gambler' by Kenny Rogers.

  • 17 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I like it, its really different :) that's kinda how alot of ppl see things and then in the end their sitting face to face with someone that can relate.
    5.5
    thanks for taking the time to read my poem :)

    Natalie

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