Unbound {{rictameter}}

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Apr 6, 2007


Unbound;
Mundane hades
Unshackled from Satan
Suppress all purity of youth,
Releasing infuriation within
One of Inferno's putrid souls
To spew on innocence,
Found blanketed;
Unbound.

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I would really like to know what people think about this poem. It took me a while to write, but I enjoyed trying a new style of writing.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I really like the new style you tired here.
    You described well and still told a story.
    It's short, and I feel you could add to this, but it's still well written.
    Nicely done.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Well done on writing this form of poetry you really did pull it off well. Your word choice was strong and powerful you put real depth into this piece. I enjoyed it from start to finish. The flow was flawless. All in all this was an amazing poem. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow so wat umm tht style? its very interesting..this poem is yet another good poem from you...scared me for a lil..if u try to imagine it..a 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I like this poem, it focuses on a very nice topic, and I love how you use details in the poem. Very nice, 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    Hey plz read and comment my new poems. i want to know what u think

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