Kwarto.. "Room"

by Marc Ortiz   Apr 6, 2007


Hey thats me in the corner
Standing alone in the dark
Staring at your blue eyes
Its drowning me to sleep
You always ignore me
As if you dint know me
We are in the same room
Breathing the same air
Why did it happen..
The tragedy that broke us apart..
I need you, please..
Its killing me, not
To be right at your side
You inspire me
I need, you please..
To guide me, in
The right direction
I need you, please..
You're like the sun
And I am the moon
I'll be waiting for you
I'll be here for you
you'll here
I promise.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Nice...keep up the good work (^_^)

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    This is like seing myself in the mirror...
    creepy...(not talking about your poem, talking about how easy it is to me to relate to it...)
    it seems to me that you like to write in free verse...(that's good...;) )
    it's really a wonderful sad poem...(i bet everyone says this to you, but i don't really know what to say more...i'm out of words...lol)
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

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