Lost Love (Cinquain)

by Once an Angel   Apr 7, 2007


Heartache
Burning hatred
Dissolves to feeling numb
Empty and desperately alone
Shattered

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    A flawless portrayal of how a lost love breaks one's spirit. This Cinquain was written and presented rather well and sound. The overall diction and flow of words were terrific. As a result, on the whole, I give you my props for writing such a fantastic formed poetry. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    An apt description

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    Very beautifully worded. Depicts heartache in it's most desperate state very well I must say. Excellent cinquain!