The Unseen

by Lady C   Apr 8, 2007


I can be the one beside you;
I know I can!
But yet....
I'm holding back

They say;
That its a certain pleasure in weeping
Its that it?

Do I WANT to be broken?
Do I crave the attention from it?

Am I really that shallow?

Probably...

Can't I, just for a little while,
Only a day or two;
Be normal?

So I can see what its like;
To have something.

Just to ease my inner commotion for a while.
I can trick myself into normality...

Can't I?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, this poem is amazing. You described your emotions perfectly. Wording is superb, I loved it.
    Deep, excellent poem with outstanding atmosphere like this one really deserves 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can relate to this poem, it's simply but excellently written.
    "Just to ease my inner commotion for a while.
    I can trick myself into normality..." - great lines.
    5/5

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