Tell Me Now, Tell Me True...<3

by TwiztidJuggalette   Apr 9, 2007


These feelings I have
I just can't explain
Should I tell you?
Do you feel the same?

What would you say
If I told you how I feel
Would you laugh it off?
Of ask if they were real?

I don't know how much longer
I can keep them inside
There getting harder
Harder to hide

I should just tell you
Get if off my chest
Then I can wait
And hope for the best

Why can't you give me a hint?
A little sign will do
It'll be much easier to know
If what we have is true

Although some days
I want to give up and run away
I should move on
But my heart is bound to stay

For some reason
I just come back
Maybe because I trust you
Or its the strength I lack

Just tell me now
And tell me true
So when I'm with you
I can say "I LOVE YOU"

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  • 18 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh I just loved this one!

    It was so easy for me to relate with the emotions you described. Amazing job on this one , you have just been added to my favorites!

    Well done *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Another cute poem but still cliche.. the flow was perfect and you still described your emotions well

  • 18 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    It is a great poem, but there are some problems with it, I think.

    For one, I think if you added some simple punctuation, the flow in some places would be helped alot. Secondly, the last stanza holds two same word rhyming sentences in a row which is too repeditive. Try to switch some of the words around in a scheme like abcb; instead of abcc.

    It is a good poem though, nice work.

    If there are any questions message me.

    ~Richi~

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxBrOkEnAnGeLxXx

    Another great poem...
    lookin forward to reading more of ur stuff xx
    ~shell~

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