Hope

by JaMeS   Apr 9, 2007


I hope your still there
i hope your proud of me
proud of the person Ive become
i hope your watching over me still
even tho your confined to heaven now
i hope your still watch lovingly
knowing that I'm trying
I'm not proud of what Ive done
and at the moment I'm not really proud of who i am
i need the feeling of your love
more now than ever before
needing the warmth of pride
i feel I'm alone in this life
in a life i cant really deal with

there may be a lot of people around me
doesn't actually mean there here for me
there all moving forward
moving in directions of their own
and I'm left not really leading anywhere
thats why i need your more than i ever did
because in the end nothings worse than this feeling of being alone
and not knowing where I'm going
not matter how many times Ive tried to change or how many people are physically around me

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  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Aw james, a beautiful poem, so sad. i hope theyre in a better place now babe, xox Greta

  • 16 years ago

    by Marjan

    You feel what we all feel.
    and you've written it down really well.
    Well Done!

    Marjan

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Very nice poem. sad and the emotion was felt.

    i hope your still watch lovingly

    in this line you may want to change "watch" to "watching" for better grammer.

    i think you did a great job on this poem. I can relate to lots of your poems. 5/5 keep up the great work =)

    Thanks for the comment

    Take Care. =)

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